10 Words to Remove from Your Job Descriptions Today

Ron Levi10 min read
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10 Words to Remove from Your Job Descriptions Today

The words you choose in a job description do more than describe a role. They signal who belongs and who does not. Research consistently shows that subtle language choices in job descriptions drive away qualified candidates — particularly women, older workers, and people from underrepresented groups.

A 2023 study from the Journal of Applied Psychology found that job postings with exclusionary language received 30% fewer applications from women and 25% fewer from candidates over 40. That is not a minor gap. It is a systemic leak in your talent pipeline.

Here are 10 words and phrases to remove from your job descriptions today, why they are problematic, and what to use instead.

1. "Rockstar" or "Ninja"

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Why it is a problem: These terms skew heavily masculine in connotation and signal a bro-culture environment. They also lack any meaningful definition — what does a "marketing ninja" actually do?

What to use instead: Expert, specialist, or senior practitioner. These terms describe competence without the cultural baggage.

| Before | After | |---|---| | We're looking for a coding ninja | We're looking for an experienced software engineer | | Sales rockstar wanted | Senior sales representative wanted |

Beyond the gender implications, "rockstar" and "ninja" also signal a workplace that may prioritize flash over substance. Candidates who value structured, collaborative environments may self-select out.

2. "Young and Energetic"

Why it is a problem: This is age discrimination, full stop. Under the Age Discrimination in Employment Act (ADEA), using age-related language in job postings can create legal liability. Even if you do not intend to exclude older workers, this phrasing signals that they are not welcome.

What to use instead: Motivated, enthusiastic, or driven. These describe the trait you actually want without tying it to age.

The irony is that "energetic" describes a personality characteristic, not a work output. A 55-year-old who consistently delivers results is more valuable than a 25-year-old who is energetic but unfocused. Describe what you need, not who you imagine doing it.

3. "Digital Native"

Why it is a problem: This term is a proxy for age. It implies that only people who grew up with smartphones can be technologically proficient. That is demonstrably false — and it discourages experienced professionals from applying.

What to use instead: Tech-savvy, proficient with [specific tools], or comfortable with digital tools.

If you need someone who knows Salesforce, say "proficient with Salesforce." If you need someone who can learn new software quickly, say "quick learner with new technology." Specificity beats generational shorthand every time.

4. "Manpower"

Why it is a problem: Gendered language signals, even unconsciously, that a workplace defaults to male. "Manpower" is one of the most obvious examples, but it extends to phrases like "man the booth" or "managerial manpower."

What to use instead: Workforce, team, staff, or personnel.

| Before | After | |---|---| | We need the manpower to scale | We need the team capacity to scale | | Manpower planning is essential | Workforce planning is essential |

This one is straightforward. There is no loss in clarity or impact when you switch to gender-neutral alternatives.

5. "He/His" (Gendered Pronouns in Descriptions)

Why it is a problem: Using masculine pronouns as the default ("The ideal candidate will bring his experience to...") tells non-male candidates they were not the person you had in mind when writing the listing. Research from Textio found that job posts using gendered pronouns receive significantly fewer applications from the excluded gender.

What to use instead: They/their, or rewrite the sentence to avoid pronouns entirely.

| Before | After | |---|---| | The candidate will use his judgment | The candidate will use their judgment | | He will manage a team of five | This role manages a team of five |

Modern style guides from the AP, APA, and Chicago Manual of Style all endorse singular "they." There is no grammatical reason to default to masculine pronouns in 2026.

6. "Culture Fit"

Why it is a problem: "Culture fit" is the most commonly cited reason for rejecting candidates — and it is also the vaguest. In practice, it often means "this person is like us," which reinforces homogeneity. A Harvard Business Review study found that "culture fit" assessments disproportionately disadvantage candidates from different socioeconomic, racial, and educational backgrounds.

What to use instead: Values alignment, mission-driven, or shared commitment to [specific value].

The difference matters. "Culture fit" asks "would I want to get a beer with this person?" Values alignment asks "does this person share our commitment to customer obsession, transparency, and continuous improvement?" One is subjective and exclusionary. The other is specific and measurable.

7. "Aggressive"

Why it is a problem: "Aggressive" has strong masculine connotations and can deter women from applying. It also carries negative associations for many people of color. Linguistic research shows that women are penalized for displaying "aggressive" behavior in the workplace while men are rewarded for it — so requiring aggression in a job posting creates a double bind.

What to use instead: Results-driven, ambitious, proactive, or high-performing.

| Before | After | |---|---| | Aggressive sales targets | Ambitious sales targets | | We need an aggressive negotiator | We need a skilled negotiator | | Aggressive growth strategy | Ambitious growth strategy |

Notice how the replacements are actually more precise. "Results-driven" tells a candidate what you care about. "Aggressive" tells them how you expect them to behave.

8. "Work Hard, Play Hard"

Why it is a problem: This phrase is a red flag for many candidates, particularly parents, caregivers, people with disabilities, and anyone who values boundaries. It implies long hours, after-work socializing as a job requirement, and a workplace that does not respect personal time. Glassdoor data shows that companies using this phrase in job postings have lower ratings for work-life balance.

What to use instead: Work-life balance, flexible schedule, or describe your actual benefits.

If your company has great perks, name them. "Flexible hours, generous PTO, and a team that respects off-hours" is infinitely more appealing than "work hard, play hard" — and it is honest about what the experience actually looks like.

9. "Fast-Paced"

Why it is a problem: "Fast-paced" is the single most overused phrase in job descriptions. It has become meaningless through repetition. But beyond being a cliche, it can signal chaos, lack of process, and burnout — which discourages experienced professionals who have seen what "fast-paced" actually looks like in practice.

What to use instead: Dynamic, evolving, or growth-stage. Better yet, be specific about what you mean.

| Before | After | |---|---| | Fast-paced environment | Growing team shipping weekly product updates | | Must thrive in a fast-paced setting | Comfortable managing multiple priorities across projects |

Specificity is the antidote to jargon. If your environment is genuinely demanding, describe the demands. Candidates can then self-assess whether the pace fits their working style.

10. "Competitive Salary"

Why it is a problem: This is not a diversity issue per se, but it is a transparency issue that disproportionately affects women and minorities. When salaries are hidden behind "competitive," candidates who are less comfortable negotiating — disproportionately women and underrepresented groups — end up with lower offers. A 2024 survey by Glassdoor found that job postings with salary ranges received 44% more applications than those without.

What to use instead: A specific salary range, such as "$85,000 - $105,000 depending on experience."

Pay transparency laws are expanding rapidly. As of 2026, Colorado, California, New York, Washington, and over a dozen other states require salary ranges in job postings. Beyond compliance, listing your range is simply good business. It filters out candidates who are outside your budget and builds trust with those who are in it.

The Cumulative Effect of Language

No single word will tank your hiring pipeline. But the cumulative effect of exclusionary language is significant. A job description that uses "rockstar," "aggressive," "fast-paced," and "culture fit" in the same posting is sending a clear message — even if you did not intend it.

Research from Textio analyzed over 10 million job postings and found that:

These are not marginal gains. They are the difference between a competitive hiring process and a struggling one.

How to Audit Your Existing Job Descriptions

You do not need to rewrite everything from scratch. Follow this process:

  1. Pull your current active listings. Export them into a single document.
  2. Search for each word on this list. Use Ctrl+F. It takes five minutes.
  3. Replace with the suggested alternatives. Keep the meaning, change the signal.
  4. Run it through a bias detection tool. Tools like Textio, Gender Decoder, or the inclusive language features in Winnow's employer platform can flag issues you might miss.
  5. Review with a diverse group. Ask team members from different backgrounds to read the posting and flag anything that feels off.

Beyond Word Choice: Structural Improvements

Language is only one piece of inclusive job descriptions. Consider these structural changes as well.

Trim your requirements list. Research from Hewlett-Packard found that men apply for jobs when they meet 60% of qualifications, while women apply only when they meet 100%. Shorter, more focused requirements lists reduce this gap.

Separate "required" from "preferred." Be explicit about what is truly necessary versus what is a bonus. This gives candidates permission to apply even if they do not check every box.

Describe outcomes, not credentials. Instead of "MBA required," try "demonstrated ability to develop and execute business strategy." This opens the door to candidates with non-traditional backgrounds who can do the job.

If you are looking for guidance on structuring the full job description — not just the language — check out our guide on how to write job descriptions that attract better candidates.

Measuring the Impact

After updating your language, track these metrics over 30, 60, and 90 days:

| Metric | What to Watch | |---|---| | Application volume | Total applications per posting | | Demographic diversity | Gender, age, and background mix of applicants | | Quality of applicants | Percentage advancing past initial screen | | Time to fill | Days from posting to accepted offer | | Offer acceptance rate | Percentage of offers accepted |

If you are using Winnow's employer tools, these metrics are tracked automatically across all your job postings, making it easy to see how language changes affect your pipeline.

The Bottom Line

Inclusive language is not about political correctness. It is about precision. The words on this list are imprecise, exclusionary, or both. Replacing them makes your job descriptions clearer, more welcoming, and more effective at attracting the full range of talent available to you.

The cost of making these changes is about 15 minutes per job description. The cost of not making them is losing qualified candidates you never even knew existed.

Written by Ron Levi

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